This last Saturday, June 21, I finished reading "What is the What" by Dave Eggars. It is billed as a novel but is essentially a biography of Valentino Achak Deng, one of the "Lost Boys" of Sudan who fled a civil war in Sudan.
Thousands of boys died during their 1,000- mile walk to Ethiopia, most from starvation and dehydration, some from man-eating lions, and others from attack by the murahaleen; Sudanese government-armed Arab militias. The boys live for a time in relative peace in a refugee camp - Pinyudo.
Then, Valentino and all refugees at Pinyudo are forced to leave Ethiopia when that country's dictator, Mengistu Haile Mariam, is overthrown. They were run out of the country at gunpoint and forced to swim the Gilo River where two thousand lives were claimed by shooting, drowning or crocodiles.
They ended up in a huge refugee camp - Kakuma in Kenya. Eventually, Valentino made it to the United States where he met Dave Eggars, a Bay Area writer who agreed to write his story. Valentino has created a foundation and uses his web site to tell the story of his efforts to rebuild his village (Marial Bai) in Sudan.
The setting: In the vast camp of Kakuma which houses 72,000 refugees from all over Africa, Valentino has achieved a position of leadership. He's been a model student in the camp's schools gaining an education he never would have had in his village in Sudan. He's participated in the camp's drama program and even performed plays in the other-worldly, bustling metropolis of Nairobi. He's gained the lofty status of coordinator for the Youth and Culture Program, a paying job with an office, unheard of for a Sudanese boy without any family.
More on Public Speaking enhances leadership of famous African refugee, Valentino Achak Deng
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June 23, 2008
Low Tech Presentation: Paper or Electronics?
How much has technology improved our lives?
Beyond belief! you might say. Complications galore! Hate it! someone else might say. Even before our current electronic revolution, Thoreau had an opinion about the technology of his era:
"Our inventions are wont to be pretty toys, which distract our attention from serious things. They are but improved means to an unimproved end."
While none of us would completely do away with the electronics in our lives, the ones surrounding us or sitting on our laps or attached to our ears right at this very minute, we do have to wonder: What have we given up?
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June 15, 2008
Communication: Is Our Culture Failing Us?
"We live in a culture that barely acknowledges and rarely celebrates the arts or artists." Dana Gioia, Chair for the U.S. National Endowment for the Arts
How many writers, artists, scientists can the average American name?
In a speech delivered to the graduating class of Stanford University, Dana Gioia decried the lack of interest in cultural figures (other than pop culture) in America today.
He claims that the cultural entities of today are all for the sake of entertainment. And so ultimately it follows that everything today comes with a price tag. When celebrities appear on radio or TV talk shows, their main, and often only, purpose is to push their book, movie, new TV show, or a new vote.
What has happened to American culture?
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May 7, 2008
The Elevator Speech
It is almost impossible when meeting acquaintances, friends of friends, business associates, to not be forced to give your "elevator speech." If you are not sure what an elevator speech is, it is just a clever name for a mundane task: answering the ubiquitous question "what do you do?" Nonetheless, while mundane, the elevator speech is quite important; who knows what possible role the person you give your speech to will take in your life: perhaps you have found your next client, or employer, friend, partner, or an important contact for further networking?
Here are a few tips to help.
1: Keep it succinct and interesting
A successful elevator speech will be a descriptive statement that provokes questions and interest.
The first obvious reaction to the question of "what do you do?" is to quickly give your label for your profession; however, I think this is a mistake. Instead, frame what you do in a more interesting way: instead of saying you are a lawyer, say that you try to help the disenfranchised and under-represented get a fair-hearing. Explain what you do in terms of benefits and who it is you are helping.
2: Keep your audience in mind
Did you meet this person professionally or in your personal life? While it may be okay to be highly informal at the bar, this off-hand style will probably not be met well at important business meetings. That said, you don't want to be too formal either, since this will make you seem stiff and less personable.
3: Practice and polish
Since you will be asked this question often throughout your life, and the answer is so short, there really is no reason to not have a good answer ready. Practice your speech so that it starts to sound natural and effortless, without any verbal filler or awkward phrasing.
4: Don't be over the top
Finally, some people in an attempt to come across as interesting may overdo it. For example, to make sure that they don't fall into the trap of pigeon-holing themselves, they will give vague answers such as: "I make people's dreams come true." This, however, sounds more cliché than it does interesting and will often turn your audience off.
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May 6, 2008
Alternative Reality Games and Public Speaking
Have you ever noticed that the most charismatic people all share the power of being able to tell a good story?
Nonetheless, storytelling is not a static art: as new media evolves, so does the way in which we tell stories. Recently, with the interconnectivity of media and the power of the Internet a new way of storytelling has emerged: the Alternative Reality Game or ARG.
The ARG is revolutionary in several ways: it is a complex and subtle way of telling a story that utilizes multiple media sources and requires a large and collaborative audience to work together to progress forward in the story; it is through the overlapping of fiction and reality that the ARG gets its name. Thus the ARG is powerful in a different way than the usual story: it is more about the audience than about the storyteller. By breaking down the traditional “fourth wall,” the audience has an active and essential role in the development of the story itself. Anything that includes the audience in such a way cannot help but be thoroughly engaging.
Now what can be gleaned from the new ARG phenomenon? Well, one of the places that the power of the story can be most effective – but is often underused – is during presentations and public speaking.
During your next presentation, try taking a page from ARGs: instead of standing rigid on the stage, try moving into the audience; instead of just using your voice, try using several media sources to get your point across; instead of turning your presentation into a lecture, try getting the audience involved in the story by asking questions and letting their answers help guide the way you tell it.
Once you’ve become an accomplished storyteller, you will have mastered most of the skills necessary to be a charismatic speaker.

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This video was sent to me by my meditation teacher. It's a talk by neuroanatomist Jill Bolte Taylor. Having a stroke the thought hits her, "This is so cool."
As the caption reads on the TED Talks page:
Neuroanatomist Jill Bolte Taylor had an opportunity few brain scientists would wish for: One morning, she realized she was having a massive stroke. As it happened — as she felt her brain functions slip away one by one, speech, movement, understanding — she studied and remembered every moment. This is a powerful story about how our brains define us and connect us to the world and to one another.
From a public speaking / presentation skills standpoint:
- Dr. Taylor uses movement extremely effectively.
- Her use of a very surprising prop may shock you but will certainly compell you to pay attention.
- Her expressive (though thin and reedy) voice expresses her emotional journey very effectively.
- She also demonstrates great humor, vulnerability, and passion.
She also offers her personal and scientific observations about how the two halves of the brain function:
- She uses an ineresting metaphor comparing the Right to a Parallel Processor and the Left to a Serial Processor.
She says that the Right:
- Is concerned with This Present Moment.
- Thinks in pictures.
- Learns kinesthetically.
- Unites and connects us with others.
Meanwhile, the Left:
- Thinks linearly and methodically.
- Is focused on the past and the future.
- Picks out details, categorizes and organizes.
- Thinks in language.
- Is the voice that says, "I am" and, hence, separates us from others.
It's a compelling and powerful story - well worth watching. BTW, this is an 18 minute video and it takes awhile to load. Or you can go directly to the TED Talk video here.
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April 6, 2008
Creating a Story

Who doesn’t love a story?! Whether it’s ours or theirs, fiction or non-fiction? Who doesn’t want to be drawn in and captivated?
From the days of humans exchanging tales around a flickering cave fire to watching today’s widescreen TV, storytelling as a way of embellishing or improvising an event is an art that will always be with us. Ancient times as well as our current high-tech times have provided stories which educate, entertain, convey information, put forth the morals of a particular culture and more.
Powerful personal stories increase the impact of any presentation. Include a story in your speech, your meeting, your one-on-one and you will capture their interest and help clarify your message. Add the drama of a personal story, including a difficulty you have overcome.
Don’t relate a personal success but illustrate a struggle. Everyone can relate to a struggle.Give your story characters, thereby giving the story life which will reel in your audience and help them relate to you on a deeper level.
Learn the elements of effective stories and how to create a story. It’s the best way to create an effective and powerful presentation. Learn More >>
Below, Professor Brian Sturm of the UNC at Chapel Hill School of Information and Library Science presents storytelling as a way of organizing information, conveying emotion and building community. Though his presentation skills need work, the points he makes in his lecture are useful.
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February 23, 2008
Amazing graphic presentation from Hans Rosling at TED
TED Talks always offers furtile ground for us bloggers on presentation and public speaking. This particular presentation is from Hans Rosling, who is a Professor of International Health at Karolinska Institutet and Director of Gapminder Foundation, in Stockholm, Sweden. His talk is about a weighty topic - mortality rates across the globe.
This is one of the best uses of graphics I have ever seen. In addition, Roslings enthusiasm and energy, conversational and self-effacing style make him a charming and effective speaker. He opens with an amusing story about how he started teaching global development to Swedish undergraduate students. His use of graphics to support his story is clever and funny. It's a remarkable use of visual media.
I won't comment much on the graphics and statistical analysis because Andrew Dlugan, author of the stellar public speaking blog Six Minutes offers up an outstanding review of Roslings use of statistics here.
Click on the photo below to be transported to the video URL. Enjoy!
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As always, the wisdom and humor of Scott Adams' Dilbert strip uniquely captures the corporate culture. This speaks to the importance of authenticity and credibility. Those of you in sales organizations should get a kick out of this.


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February 12, 2008
Example of good public speaking from PJ Kim at Harvard Bus School
I came across this video today on YouTube. PJ Kim took first place in the Harvard Business School's Public Speaking Contest in 2006. He deserved it.
PJ models some important elements of public speaking:
- A compelling opening hook
- Humor
- Movement
- Authenticity
- Storytelling
- Metaphor (parallels dating and job hunting)
- Vulnerability
- Props
- A simple structure (3 points)
The video's been edited into 3 pieces. Enjoy!
Part 1

